The Soundbite Builder | Red Door Stories

Find your magic words

  • Use 5 simple phrases that capture attention and sell.
  • Apply them everywhere to increase revenue.
  • Explain what you do in seconds.
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The StoryBrand soundbite strategy, start to finish. When you're ready, your builder is one scroll away.

The bottle effect

You're great at what you do, but these four things are...

Making it hard for clients to see why they should hire you.

A person trapped inside a bottle, trying to read the label from the inside
  • The internet has become a sea of sameness.The same AI prompts produce the same ideas and phrases. As more businesses rely on AI to write their websites, it becomes harder for the right clients to see what makes you different.
  • Generic AI copy erodes trust.When your website sounds generic or impersonal, it's harder for people to connect with you. Your ideal clients aren't looking for perfection. They're looking for an actual human who understands them.
  • You're too close to your own business.Writing or talking about your own business feels impossible, because it's like being inside the bottle trying to read the label that can only be read from the outside.
  • Clarity means less, not more.When your message isn't working, you add more words. More words make it worse. Clarity comes from cutting out the noise.

High cognitive load is the enemy.

When your message makes the brain work hard, people quietly move on. When it's clear, they lean in. Here's the difference.

Hard to understand

"I use an integrative process rooted in emotional realignment for passionate executive leaders."

Your reader has to decode every phrase. Most won't. They leave.
Instantly clear

"Feel stuck in your career? I can help burned out executives figure out what's next."

Plain, direct, and all about them. That's what makes the right person lean in.
The PEACE framework

Build your five soundbites

Five short, plain-spoken lines that take your client from a problem to peace. You write each one yourself. Nothing is auto-generated, and that's what makes it sound like you. Fill them in and watch your story come together on the right. The simpler they sound, the harder they work.

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Problem
What pain are they feeling right now?

This is what gets their attention. Start with the problem they're already living with, not the solution you offer. Name it in their words.

Examples (click to try one)
  • You're stuck in a job you don't like.
  • Your relationship feels tense.
  • Money always feels tight.
Keep it to one plain sentence.
Act as a StoryBrand messaging coach. My ideal client is [describe them]. In one short, plain sentence, name the problem they're already feeling and would say out loud. No jargon. Make it sound like something they'd think when they wake up, not marketing language.
E
Empathy
Show them you understand how that feels.

This builds trust. It tells them you've been in that room and you know what it's like. Say it the way a real person would out loud.

Examples (click to try one)
  • I get it. Making a change feels overwhelming.
  • I get it. Feeling disconnected is painful.
  • I get it. Managing money is hard.
Start with something like "I get it..."
My client's problem is: [paste your problem soundbite]. Write one short empathy line that shows I understand how that feels. Warm and human, like a trusted friend, not a therapist or a brochure. It can start with "I get it."
A
Answer
A clear, simple line about how you help.

Not everything you do. Not your full method. Just a plain sentence about the solution. You're the guide throwing a rope down to your client.

Examples (click to try one)
  • I help you find the right direction and a clear plan.
  • I teach you simple tools to communicate and reconnect.
  • I give you a clear plan to pay off debt and save.
Start with "I help you..." or "I give you..."
Here's what I do: [describe your offer in a few sentences]. Boil it down to ONE plain sentence about how I help, starting with "I help you" or "I give you." Cut the methodology and the features. Just the simple solution to my client's problem.
C
Change
Who do they become after working with you?

A shift in confidence, identity, or momentum. Describe who your client is on the other side, not just the result they get.

Examples (click to try one)
  • You feel confident about your next move.
  • Get good at relationships.
  • Be in control of your finances.
Describe the identity shift, not just an outcome.
My client starts out feeling: [paste your problem soundbite]. After working with me, who do they become? Write one short line about the identity or confidence shift, not just the result. Plain and human.
E
End result
What does their happy ending look like?

The better future. The life they actually want. Keep it specific and human. This is their version of a happy ending.

Examples (click to try one)
  • You land a job you actually enjoy.
  • Enjoy a deeper connection that lasts.
  • Enjoy more money and less stress.
Make it the future they actually want.
Write one short, specific line describing the happy ending my client wants after solving this problem: [paste your problem soundbite]. Make it feel like real life, not a marketing promise. Something they'd actually daydream about.
The filter

Run your soundbites through the 4 rules

A strong soundbite passes all four. From the StoryBrand messaging framework. Read your five lines out loud, then check each rule they clear. This isn't a score to impress anyone. It's a gut check for clarity.

Zero cognitive loadDon't make people think. If a stranger has to work to understand it, they move on. The value is obvious. Clear beats clever.
Linked to survivalIt ties to something they already care about: saving time or money, less stress, better relationships, looking like the expert.
Memorable and repeatableA stranger could say it back after hearing it once. Short, plain phrases get shared. Clever ones get forgotten.
Makes them the heroIt sounds like you talking about your client's problem out loud, not polished brand-speak about you.
Check each rule your soundbites pass.

Your soundbite story

Read these five lines in order. They should tell one clear story a stranger could follow.

Problem
Your problem line shows up here
Empathy
Your empathy line shows up here
Answer
Your answer line shows up here
Change
Your change line shows up here
End result
Your end-result line shows up here
Your lines stay on this page while it's open. Copy or download them below to keep them.
You did it

You've got your five soundbites

That's the hard part, done. Grab them now so they're yours to keep. The next section shows you where to put them.

Take your soundbites with you

Copy them to paste anywhere, or download them as a file. Do this now so you always have them.

Now put them to work

Where to use your soundbites

Your soundbites do one job: grab the right person's attention the first time they meet you. Don't overthink it. Put them anywhere someone bumps into you for the first time.

Your five soundbites are attention-getters. Their whole job is to make the right person stop and think, "wait, that's me. Tell me more." That happens the moment they first meet you, so that's where these go.
Your website header

Lead with your Problem line as the big headline, then your Answer right underneath it.

Example
Feeling stuck in your career?
I help you find the right direction and a clear plan.
Your Instagram or LinkedIn bio

Open with your Problem and Answer so a stranger understands you in one line.

Example
Stuck in a job you don't like? I help you find your next move.
When someone asks "what do you do?"

Say your Problem, then your Answer. Skip the job title.

Example
"You know how a lot of people feel stuck in a job they don't like? I help them find a clear next move they're actually excited about."
Emails, newsletters, and podcast intros

Use your Problem line as the opening hook anywhere people first hear from you.

Example
"Most people feel stuck in a job they don't love and can't see their next move..."
Kris Jones, founder of Red Door Stories
Meet your guide

Hi, I'm Kris

Founder of Red Door Stories · StoryBrand Certified Guide

For more than 20 years I've helped brands like Nike and Adidas tell clearer stories. Now I help coaches, consultants, and service providers say what they do in a way that gets the right clients to lean in.

I co-wrote StoryBrand Your Coaching Business with Donald Miller, and I built this tool to give you a real head start on your five soundbites. When you're ready for a second set of eyes, I'm right here.

You've got the words. Want a second set of eyes on them?

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